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Dark Clouds.. by ~xXHells-AngelXx:iconxXHells-AngelXx:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Surrealism


The sky darkens
A storm breaks through
The rain falls in sheets
Lightning strikes so close
Thunder shakes the house as it rumbles
The lights flicker
And I know when they go out I'm alone
I think of you, it keeps me sane
A smile shows through only to slink away
The sudden thought strips the comfort
I think of you, but do you think of me?
You seem so distant, the thought isn't reassuring,
I tell myself I'm wrong
I tell myself it's crazy
I tell myself the truth
The truth doesn't hurt anymore
I think of you and me
And how things were
I think of now
I don't mind.
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Author's Comments

Random depression during the storm yesterday.

A couple hundred poems like this and i can publish a sad poem book XD

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~EgoRequiem Aug 11, 2008, 7:46:53 AM
know the feeling! but keep it up!
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~xXHells-AngelXx Aug 11, 2008, 7:50:01 AM
thanks ^^

--
"He's dead, Jim."
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~Iziza666 Aug 11, 2008, 10:42:17 AM
awww, sad face leyna. but it's a nicely written poem.

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Dude! Just Be Yourself!
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~xXHells-AngelXx Aug 11, 2008, 11:32:39 AM
thanks ^^;

--
"He's dead, Jim."
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